This is a poem based off my saddened emotions of missing my boyfriend. he boarded the plane at 1:01 on October 29th arizona time to go to his army National guard Basic training... ( Credit goes to the preview photo. idk who you are or if your on here but credit goes to you) when im upset i tend to let my heart jump to my fingers when my ears are full of music to lead them to type.
Edit: Holy crap! already 91 faves! ive nenver gotten this many faves on ANYTHING!
Edit edit: ummmm WOW!!! over 100 faves! thank you thank you! all i did was write like i usually do .O3O
`anmari has been spreading her infectious positivity throughout our community for over 6 years. Throughout this time Ana has been at the core of all things devious, passionately developing an eclectic gallery, helping organise devmeets, participating in chat events and also recently completed dedicating her time as a Community Volunteer. We are absolutely delighted to bestow the Deviousness Award for May 2013 to `anmari, congratulations! Read More
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I have but one suggestion, however: "Those who take this amazing thing for granted are not but fools."
This seems to suggest the opposite of the message you are trying to convey (that only fools take love for granted). If this is indeed the case, the word "not" should be changed to "nothing", or else omitted completely.
Otherwise, this is really a very nice little poem.
(I love the preview picture, by the way. So cute!